The Food Chain

Who is at the top?

The Capital or the capitalist,

 

The lion that ate the man

Or the man with lion’s share.

Reviews

[L. Michelle Corp]

Wow, with so few words you said so, so much. To me this proves you're a deep thinker and talented.

[MadalaJose]

thank you for the review

[Circe]

a great poem, it seems to highlight for me the power struggles of human nature.

[MadalaJose]

thank you circe

[Gee]

Hmmmm,Cecil thought it was he but the dentist put a stop to that.......Enjoyed this muchly

[MadalaJose]

Thank you Gee

[Celie Rose]

I found your writing interesting. Short but sweet. Point was proved. Good Job

[MadalaJose]

thanks a lot

[zee]

With just few words, some have got to think life through again. Awesome. Just when I thought there would be more words to a poem, you defied that belief and inspired me.

[MadalaJose]

thank you for the review. I appreciate

[alifeacoustic]

The man with the lions share can never be on top, not in Reality. The man on top is only on top because he has more than most, thus depriving others. Whereas the lion, will eat his fill, when it is required. Greed versus need.
Amazing writing my friend. So much said, so profoundly, with so few words.

[MadalaJose]

thank you very much

[alifeacoustic]

You are very welcome.

[Senu Jayasinghe]

The lion eats the man, but the man doesn't eat the lion. So technically its still the lion at the top. But yeah still confusing.
You think different, question what others don't even bother thinking about. And express it precisely. Great job!

[MadalaJose]

Thank you for the review Senu

[inconsistentsea]

To me, they are often one and the same.

[Sami Khalil]

A wonderful thought provoking post. I like it a lot.... Keep it up.....:)......

[MadalaJose]

thank you. I appreciate

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome. ....:)......

[MelissaAndres]

Wow! You say so much in such few words! Very powerful!

[MadalaJose]

thanks a lot.

[MelissaAndres]

You are very welcome!