AT THE EDGE OF SUCCESS

Success screaming in my face

Scratching my eardrum's surface

Creativity mushrooming in my brains

Favor rushing like blood in my veins

Palpitating my heart with progress

I have come of age; standing at the edge of success

Reviews

[Ms. Twitch]

Great piece! I read this a few times over until I almost sensed a beat behind it (maybe just me) but I enjoyed reading this!

[MadalaJose]

thank you, i am glad that you enjoyed it

[alifeacoustic]

Nicely captured Madala. The feeling that coming of age and being successful brings. Thank you for sharing.

[MadalaJose]

Thank you alifeacoustic for the comment