Mary

The beautiful high I get from Mary (marijuana)

Oh how I love Mary,
She takes me high and high everytime we fly, stimulating my mind as I go for the sky,
Oh how I appreciate Mary, especially with doses of liquor, then I'll be so much in love that tomorrow morning I wont even remember.
Oh how I crave Mary, without her I would be lost and confused, she's the greatest therapy I have ever used. She takes me to a land of euphoria, where everything is perfect and where I'm always at peace and relaxed. She escapes me from reality so beautifully that I don't ever want to return back. Mary is a blessing to human kind, and anyone that doesn't agrees has obviously never gave Mary a fair try. Oh how I love, appreciate and crave Mary, so much so, that it's pretty scary

Author's Note

What do you think? :)

Reviews

[Carol Cashes]

I'm laughing because I spent an entire decade with that broad and she made me laugh...and laugh. Memories that include laughter are the best ones. Form and arrangement are easily addressed - it's content that some poets forgo in order to present unique and different ways of arranging words on the page. The only "content" issue I would change is the last line - this is a love letter and there should be no fear.

[Onyia-Ali, Kingsley Chu..]

You are really growing. Your stanzas should be properly arranged. However, you have written well. Your diction speaks. Well done.

[ssstikdownn]

Thanks! :) xoxo

[K.N. Thorn]

You wrote a very nice piece of poetry there is a few things I would change structure wise to make it flow a little better but all in all it is a really nice poem for Mary Jane ;)

[ssstikdownn]

Thanks soo much! I appreciate this feedback :) xoxo

[K.N. Thorn]

Your very welcome, I enjoy reading as much as writing especially with a toke or two :) So I definitely appreciate this poem! ;)

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the poem. You could feel the positive emotion and feelings. I like how you described Mary. In the poem. Mary is alive, beautiful and strong person. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[ssstikdownn]

Thanks! :) It was about marijuana (Mary) lol

[Coyote Poetry]

You gave Marijuana life and beauty. I enjoyed the strength of statement and the description of Mary. You are welcome.