Fire

A Poem by Maddi

The flames devour, smoke billows, wood falls.

The nearby garden fence,

Looks tense.

© 2016 Maddi

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Julie McCarthy (juliesp..

thankyou for this
i felt the fear of that garden fence in this short swift poem about fire approaching it
thanks for entry into my 5 lines and under comp good luck

Posted 7 Years Ago

7 Years Ago

thank you very much

Addict With a Pen

Haha! Was not expecting that, I like it.

Posted 9 Years Ago

alanwgraham

I really like this one Maddi. Short sharp with a great ending.
Well done. Quite funny and subtle.
Alan
Would you like to have a look at my short poem 'Prejudice'?
Thanks, Alan

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Added on May 22, 2016
Last Updated on May 22, 2016

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Maddi

The oak tree by the pond with the coy fish, Norfolk, United Kingdom

About

I LOVE writing and reading poems, reading books and some fanfiction too! All literature is accepted by me! I'm also a cynical, sarcastic and rude person, but those who get to know me, love me for it. .. more..