Running

Trying so hard not to stop
Pushing myself to the limit
Sweat sliding down my face
The sound of my heart roaring in my ears
Louder and louder
My legs turn numb
But yet I still feel them burning
It's a pain I welcome whole heartily
My sides threatening to make me clasp
I barley hear my quick hard breaths
Every part of me is screaming
Begging me to stop
But my mind is clear and calm
Not listening to the pleading of my body
When it thinks I might quit
Might finally give in to the pain
It's whispers to me
Don't stop…
Keep going…

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I was a running for my first 30 years of life. I liked the long runs. 10k or above. I like and understand this poem.
"It's whispers to me
Don't stop…
Keep going… "
Runners need positive and clear mind to run. Thank you Roe for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Roe]

I'm glad my poem was able to connect with you on a personal level. Thank you for your review.

[Coyote Poetry]

I did and you are welcome.

[外人 (Gaiji..]

A wonderful description of what, I suppose, is your passion, running, right? I would guess so from how clearly you described the feelings it conveys to you. Great poem, well done !

[Roe]

Thank you so much for your review.

[Andrea Mouser]

i completely understand this!! thats how i feel when running