Wicked things

In dreams all things are possiable

 

 

 

Come to me.. Hear me
Feel me as I float on by
Your dreams
Moments of unrest.

Your sleeping form
As it lies in darkness
I enter softly
My form in a fog.

And slowly I move
on top of you now
Looking into your thoughts
Your dreams surreal.

For those are the ones
That my spirit then steals
I take all you have
Drain all your life.

Forgo all you need
Your moments of strife
You will never see again
For with me you shall come.

To see what wicked things
I then have done
For like me you shall be
Alone in the night.

A stranger to all
A creature in flight
So follow me now
Wicked things we shall become.


I alone am your master...

For you a new life has begun...

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Very mysterious and erie... it has a dark feel but with a positive vibe.... sometimes we must face the bad things to get to the good. Loved it.

[R J Askew]

So that's where my dreams have been going! I thought I was sleeping deep of late. I esp like the notion of the dream-thief going about it's task as a fog.

[Sean M. Addams]

very nice ... liked the imagery in this alot....kind of a dark sensual piece you have here... very creative and nicely done.... i feel like it is perfect the way it is!!!

[Patches I'm not so new..]

Oh come to me you sweet, succulent, sucubus and we will have a wonderful trip to the nether regions!
My goodeness Maggie, you do know how to heat up a poem! I would say more but it might get me banned!

[Fran Marie]

To see what wicked things
I then have done
For like me you shall be
Alone in the night.

Oooooooohhh Dark and surreal in its nature~ love the picture
it compliments your poetic verse nicely~great JoB on this onE!

[Legion]

I like the idea here, but the story line is atypical of most vampire/undead type stories. I think you could go places with this with an enhanced re-write. More depth. More darkness. Remember, you want to make it memoriable to the reader so they don't forget it as soon as they move on to the next page. If you do re-do it, give me a yell and I'll read it again for you. Kudos to you and keep on writing.

[deeps]

Awesome!
Nice and dark, and well written girl.
One amazing pic as well.