Because of you......

Without faith there is no hope. Without love, there is nothing but regret..

 

 

Because of you
I stand and look out towards the watery darkness
No faith
Hope..

I stand and stare
My tears finding release
As they stream down my cheeks
Falling in the water's edge at my feet.

I sigh
Ever so softly
The sound carrying out with the wind
Of time.

Towards you .. My heart
Which you hold in your hands
Its very existence at your mercy
Your thoughts of me in memory.

Do you see me?
Feel my pain?
My crying out in the darkness for your love?
My very being shattered.

Because of you..


Yes... My love..


Because of you...

 

Reviews

[Lizanne]

What a loss of love will emotionally do to the one that is left behind. The other moves on in another direction carrying your heart with them. It leaves within the deserted the question of "do I ever cross your mind and is there any regret?'' What once nutured the body and soul, now leaves it hungering for what once was and lost in sadness. Beautiful writing.

[R J Askew]

Ach, you capture the way a million people are probably feeling right NOW! They wld nod at every word of what you write here and say 'that's me'.

[Patches I'm not so new..]

My God this is a painful write, I do not understand how a person can profess to love someone then set out to delibertly cause them pain, that's not love, that's the other side of the coin "hatred" or is it just human nature to distroy what we supposedly love?
I don't have the answer but this I do know, If love would be returned with the same fervor it is given this world
would be a much better place and the cnynic would disappear.

[Fran Marie]

A powerful piece where deep emotions of pain break thru~and all because of him

vivid imagery within this one~and a perfect picture to compliment your lovely words and

vice-versa~ Nice JoB !!

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Earthshattering and so painful a tribute to the sad side of love! The passion felt here for a lost love .. the impact on this writing in creativity is very gripping and intense. I loved it! How we ponder how the other feels when a relationship is over:

Do you see me?
Feel my pain?
My crying out in the darkness for your love?
My very being shattered.

Deep inside we all believe the other can feel the raw emotions.. letting go can be so hard and draw us into a dark cave.. very stirring!

[deeps]

Whoa! Such strong deep emotion my friend.
You pulled me in to the moment.
Very well written and expressed. Like that photo ^_^