If I came to you
A Poem by
Magdelena
If I came to you
And asked you to hold me, would you?
If I came to you
And asked you to take away my pain, would you?
If I came to you
And asked you to listen to my woes, would you?
If I came to you
And begged you to rock me through the night, could you?
If I came to you
Would you be waiting with open arms?
If I came to you...
Just for that moment, would you show me your love?
© 2009 Magdelena
Reviews
done for me, many a time... only fair to do it for another; especially when asked!
Fine write, thanks for sharing.
Sallie Bear
Posted 16 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Answer to:
1. yes
2. as much of it as possible
3. for as long as it takes
4. most definaly
5.That last question you had no need to ask, but since you did
most definaly I would.
Posted 16 Years Ago
Answer to:
1. yes
2. as much of it as possible
3. for as long as it takes
4. most definaly
5.That last question you had no need to ask, but since you did
most definaly I would.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Aw, This is so wonderful. I like the way you expressed yourself here.
Posted 16 Years Ago
Aw, This is so wonderful. I like the way you expressed yourself here.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on November 21, 2009
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Magdelena Charlotte, NC
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Hello to all;
Been awhile since I been on. Most know me, some don't. Hopefully I can get to know the few that don't and catch up with all the other fine fellow poets/friends that have become so..
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