Never noticing the lone tear..

Short and sweet

I loved

You destroyed

I gave

You took

I prayed

You sinned

I cried

You coldly stared

I left

Never noticing the lone tear.

Reviews

[BlackRose]

Its good. Being able to pack a lot of meaning into a few words is difficult, but you can do it. Great.

[deeps]

I like this it's very gripping and says it all in such a few short words. This is very well expressed!