Please allow me to introduce myself

Please allow me to introduce myself

A Poem by Magdelena
"

Nature, when talked of lovingly, can be as sweet as the softest of kisses

"

 

Please allow me to introduce myself
I am beauty to behold when all is lost 
To feast your eyes upon, gaze in wonder 
In the dusk of night, I come forth.
 
Can you Feel me?
Can you See me?
I ask in my softest whisper.
 
Close your eyes and gently dream
Breath deeply my sweet scent
Feel my soft breeze, as it passes your face
Gently ruffling your hair
Your skin, as my touch leaves its trace.
 
I sit in wait for all to be still
The ending of the day to finally come
Of all ones worries just tossed aside
Yes... Gently they glide
Across my wind
In my hand of breeze.
 
Toss them, I beg
Give to me, all
For behold my beauty
Hear my soothing call.
 
In the dusk of the night I call you
My red hues of color beaming bright
Distant,I may be, yet near
Just up above you, my brilliant sight.
 
Ahhh yes...
 
I shall never leave you, I so promise
Will stand by your side till the end of time
Together we will wander, you and I
The walks that life always leave behind.
 
Stare into my beauty, my friend
The dreams that you alone share
Send forth above with fevered whisper
For this I promise, I shall always be near.
 
Yes.....
 
Please allow me to introduce myself
I've been around for the longest of times
Just rest your weary eyes upon me
And listen to my wind as it softly chimes.
 
And I shall carry you upon my golden slumber
Hold you close in my dusk filled nights
Cherish your promises you throw towards me
Gently sooth your fears of fright.
 
So..
Please allow me to introduce myself..
 
My name;
Just call me 'The ending of the night'

© 2010 Magdelena


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I like the questions you ask the reader. It makes the reader think about you and the sort of person you are. I like your style and you can introduce yourself very well as most people don't know themselves enough to do it as perfectly as you can.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great poem !!! I love how it left me feeling when I got finished reading it.
Thanks for sharing.

Kelley

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i love this piece the imagery was breath taking ... overall I thought you did an awesome job on this ..i'm very impressed on this one .... very beautifully done !!

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Magdelena
Magdelena

Charlotte, NC



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Hello to all; Been awhile since I been on. Most know me, some don't. Hopefully I can get to know the few that don't and catch up with all the other fine fellow poets/friends that have become so.. more..