Broken Promises.. ~Acrostic~

Brink of darkness surrounds me
Ringing through my thoughts
Of a time when our love was spoken
Kept in the recess of our minds
Escaping in our whispered spoken words
Newfound hope springing eternal

Pouring forth each second we could spare
Ragging like a torrent rain
Over us, beneath our very souls
Memory serves me well my love
Into the deepest thoughts of the yesterdays
Soothing words we so shared
Escaping into the place of need, hidden
So softly they leave, yet still linger on the mind.

Reviews

[Liz Alexander]

BEAUTIFUL Poem. Its so heart renching

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

good writing, best wishes.