"Mi atrevida .. Te amo .."

"Te amo" ... "Mi atrevida .. Te amo .." Spanish "I love you" "My darling.. I love you"

In the darkness of the night I see him

Behind closed lids, I become lost.

Dreams become reality

Light shines within my soul and heart.

His scent, the feel of his skin

The sound of his voice..

Oh yes...

Oh how it moves me.

 

Intoxicates my senses.

To just hear it, makes me sigh

Deep inside, where dreams become reality

Where all I wish for, becomes my only truth.

 

Yes, in the darkness I see all

Feel all..

 

For there, he is with me

My hands reaching out to feel his soft touch

Hear his voice, smooth as silk.

 

And as the night descends its sweet escape

We are one,

Together.

As it should be.

 

~~

 

Yes.. In the darkness,

I escape.

He and I...  

 

My whispered words the only sound.

 

"I love you"... 

 

"Te amo" ...

 

"Mi atrevida .. Te amo .."

 

"My darling.. I  love you"

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Well for a romantic like me your words are as sweet and intoxicating as a red wine.
Such a tender and sensual poem.

[E.H. Monroe]

Looks who's back and adding music to an already moving moving piece.
I almost got a sense of harsh depression, like a love in dual suicide. The damn thing had me read it a few times for a message and kept coming with the same. The darkness or the symbol of night and escape.
Could disect it for hours and always come up with beauty.

Haven't read ya in a while and glad I just did.

[Chris38]

Thsi was a beautiful restful and dreamy piece which captivated me.

[Patches I'm not so new..]

as usual you have made the night and scene a passionate one that is what you do best me Gumba you are on top as usual

[Dream Weaver]

"Del corazón maravillosamente escrito"
"Of the heart beautifully written"

[Jim Parson]

As it should be. A sweet, sensual, beautiful write, Magdelena.

[emmajoy]

So, so beautiful, it warms the blood to read such words; there's more than a touch of Neruda, the master of sensual poetry.

'My whispered words the only sound. "I love you"... '