Wonderful poem full of energy , fun and action this is a happy poem Me Gumba somehow this strikes mes as something that is sometimes more appropraite than Amour or depression poems I guess it depends on one's mood however I repeat LOSE THE MUSIC! It doesn't add anything it just distracts the reader
okay, so I felt guilty not reviewing this one. It certainly does lighten the moment and has a way of making you smile without actually realising...in fact you get to the last line and feel this spreading strangeness across your lips, you suddenly realise you're in the moment and enjoying every bit of it. Takes a good talent to get the readers deeply involved so that they're not even aware they are even smiling, so well done.
Hello to all;
Been awhile since I been on. Most know me, some don't. Hopefully I can get to know the few that don't and catch up with all the other fine fellow poets/friends that have become so.. more..