Are they of me?

Dreams, sometimes we pray they become reality.

 

I gaze and wonder
On what you do see
The soft touch that you feel
As your hands softly move.

Is it my body you think of?

As you lie in sleep
Your thoughts slowly traveling
Reaching out towards the one
Deep in your heart..

Is it me, my love?

I close my eyes
Inhale..

Ahh the scent
Sweet as the darkest of nights
Stars twinkling on my form
As I stand in a dream-like state
Upon the cool soft earth.

And whisper softly to the darkness
Praying deep within..

Are they of me?

Your thoughts, my love?

Are they of me?

 

Reviews

[Forest Green]

Excellent...dream-art. Questions as light and real as the moonlight. Breezes pursuing thoughts, setting them adrift and aright...

Nice poetry...

Steel

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My Romantic Goddess returns with a passionate longing to share with us all...

[Still To Witness]

Very interesting, this piece makes me feel like im yearning for someone to love me the way i love them and i want them to feel what i feel. I love this piece it made me want to finish my novel as quickly as i can lol.
this is a wonderful peice! :) keep it up :)

[SpokenWord]

If one has to ask, there is the answer to me. One never really knows what is on the mind of another. How many times do lovers think of others while with the one they love. This poem is sad that someone has to wonder like this and within the words there is the answer. Very good write, loved this one.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I want you to want me
I need you to need me
I'd love you to love me...

Very natural emotions every human being experiences... some beautiful poetry young lady.

[Patches I'm not so new..]

Now how would one answer that question? Would he tell the lady that they weren't? if he did the man would be a fool If he said yes they were she would most likely slap his face or it is just as likely that she would smile and give him a kiss. If it were me the question would be answered with a most posative YES! I'd take my chances---- This poem is as I have stated time and again on most of your endevors "top nothch you always manage to bring the reader into the piece no matter the genre love, passion, humor, depression You, Maggie are the best IMO bar none. If it were possiable I'd rate this write 101 %
Huggers me Gumba
Patches xxx