Lonely Road

Upon a lonely way you walk
With heavy feet you trod
Longing for a life you never had.

Author's Note

Enjoy! :)

Reviews

[Faffy]

wow i always applaud people who can write short poems but you are by far one of the best i have seen! i read those threee short lines about 5 times and each time got a different meaning. a true master piece =)

[InsanityWriter]

Thank you very much. ^_^ I get worried a lot about short poem... I'm very happy you liked it!! :)

[Horizon K.]

Short but very effective for the emotions you convey.Well done!

[InsanityWriter]

Thank you. :)

[Muhammad Qasim]

these lines are a perfect example of the fact that even the smallest of things can hold great power

[InsanityWriter]

Thank you for reviewing. (:

[Muhammad Qasim]

It's my pleasure!! : )

[beautiful dreamer]

i have tried and tried to review this poem lol. it's just so deep yet it's so simple and straightforward. it's beautiful, really. lonely roads our what my life map is full of right now, so this poem really hit home. great work :)

[InsanityWriter]

(: I am very happy you enjoyed it. Have a lovely day!!

[beautiful dreamer]

you too! :)

[Craba]

Love it, nicely done : )

[InsanityWriter]

Thank you. :)

[Amanda]

I liked it, very nice job :)

[InsanityWriter]

Thank you for your review. It's very much appreciated ^_^