Just don't Ask me

Mastered deception

you ask me

and I say "I'm fine"

you turn your back

and I am crying

I bet it never crossed your mind

I am really good at lying

you ask me

and I say "I hate you"

you walk away

and my heart is breaking

I bet it never crossed your mind

my love was always yours for taking

you ask me

there's no response

you check me in

forget the cost

I bet it never crossed your mind

I sold my soul, my cause is lost

Author's Note

oddly personal :P

Reviews

[Wandering Violet]

That's really sad but very true. Nicely written, and I particularly liked the line "my love was always yours for taking". Very moving.

[Brittany Lavy]

This is a very nice poem! I love the last line. "My cause is lost" is my all time favorite part. Very well done :)

[for my ♥]

.....really amazing write, I could feel all your emotions. Very nicely written.

[Miele1228]

This is a really good poem! I like the emotion in it, but just watch some spelling. The only 2 mistakes a saw were "lying" and "taking", but other than that it was wonderful and I want to see what else you can do(: