Love or Lust

slightly intense if read quickly

The realignment of mistreated organs is the

 simplicity of complex thinking.

The fault in retelling stories that

 end in beginnings and begin in happy endings.

It’s the bold corruption in the readjustment of

 picked up pieces thrown from the lives they once held together.

A griping choke hold true love is fated to encounter.

For the connection left in misery is the

 one martyr,

and the

 victim of the damnation of humanity.

Twisted statements blend well with false trust.

Follow oil and water mix love with lust.

Reviews

[Skin]

Excellent

[Kaylor Mason]

This one is really cool--the rhythm is like a waterfall

[Brandon]

i love the wording used here, while reading it was just really into it. And if i'm really into what i'm reading i obviously liked it.

[roy mccarthy]

really cool write here!

[Orlando Murcia]

Wow!!

You are so young and full of talent


Nice wording!!


Fantastic job!!


Orlando M

[Dreamer]

:) nice piece!! I particularly like the last line!! U cant mix TRUE love with lust. U've put me in a sentimental mood!!:)

[Kyla H]

Very mystical, I love the flow of this.(: nicely done.