Magic

off the top of my head

Come and join,

Come and play,

Come and witness the wonders of current day,

Come and see somthing you cant beilive,

Magic concealed by the cover of a sleeve,

The birds fly out in a storm of smoke,

The man containd in dark grey cloke, 

A unknown feeling in the core of your brain,

The mystic presance of the unexplaind,

Your having fun but the show isnt done,

There still something more amazing to come,

He looks at the ground and gives his hat a toss,

In an act of no gravity his body lifts off,

The chills you get when you fear for life,

As the man saws in half his beautiful wife,

They fear that she's dead but the man much much better,

As he pulls her in close and safley togather,

They bring out a box,

One to fit a man,

Covered with chains,

Padlocks in there hands,

He slides inside and the tops closed tight,

Covered with a curtain now out of sight,

Can he escape?

Will it be an all nighter?

But when the curtain drops he's replaced with a tiger,

The crowd cheers loud and he takes his earned bow,

Back to his normal life he shall return now.....

 

Reviews

[MagiCrystal]

Yes it needs more magic..but good..!

[Stephanie Marie<3]

This reminds me of you. Times like 23582352523.

Mister Magic Man.

[Moonlit-Blues]

Lovely so far, probably needs a bit more magic dust in the imagery, but its good so far. 'Believe?' I assume, that means in the fourth line! sweet!

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This is a good start. I could picture children playing around a magician. It really is a good start.