Key Of Success,

Key Of Success,

A Poem by Mahi sain(Mahesh)
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Nothing to say, only do it

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Read but write more,
Talk but think more,
Play but Read more,
I promise that you will be success sure,

Eat but chew more,
Weep but laugh more,
Sleep but work more,
I promise that you will be healthy sure,

Forbade but agree more,
Order but obey more,
Hate but love more,
I promise that you will learn to love sure,
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Thank you,

© 2015 Mahi sain(Mahesh)


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Short and sweet... a very niece piece of work... keep writing

Posted 10 Years Ago


Mahi sain(Mahesh)

10 Years Ago

Thank you sir for your review.
Happy new year
Really nice poem and great work.It reveals the truth...Keep it up..

Posted 10 Years Ago


Mahi sain(Mahesh)

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your review,
Great work once again, however make sure to be considerate of the grammar. .

Posted 10 Years Ago


Mahi sain(Mahesh)

10 Years Ago

Thanks for your review,
next time i will try to best result
thanks again
success....health and love..3 main pillars of life...good way of valuing them...liked it...keep it up

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mahi sain(Mahesh)

10 Years Ago

Thank you bro.
for review,
without love,success,healthy no one can enjoy life properly.. read more
Knight Writer

10 Years Ago

always welcome brother
Mahi sain(Mahesh)

10 Years Ago

Its my pleasure brother
I like the last stanza..
Good write-up...thankyou for sharing..keep it up

Posted 10 Years Ago


Mahi sain(Mahesh)

10 Years Ago

Thank you bro.
for review,

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Added on December 26, 2015
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Mahi sain(Mahesh)
Mahi sain(Mahesh)

Jodhpur, India