"Because i loved you"

Plz tell me that who wrong?

~~>Because I Loved You<~~ ~~~^^^^^^^^^^~~~ Walking alone in the street, The night is steel onn... And Its growing to be more darker, But i dont wanna go back home sooner.... Cause i am walking alone with your thought, Those time that we have together, To drop all your thought down Pthere, Cause now they hunt me as a nightmare, So i don't want to sleep now, I am sleepless from around many weeks. Yet i still believe i will forget you, Walking alone, that same street, In which we use to share all our thought, But now silence is the only things left within us; And how easily you said there that now"You love someone else", And you walked away from here making my soul Undressed And now i regret the day i met you, Hate the street i walking through, In hope not to come back here again, Because my heart knows that "I Loved You",

Reviews

[Riddhi]

I liked this poem..It had a flow..But I just wanted it to be presented as a poem..It would have made it look more beautiful..To be true , your format looks like an essay instead of poem..But the poem was indeed great..I hope that you will get your true love soon..I hope that what I told you , you will take it in a positive way..
Keep on writing and thanks for sharing..

[mou]

every line is in a flow.but to feel regret about your loved one? all the efforts get destroyed with this one word!