Lovers

Out to dinner they go,

A romantic evening they have.

Getting home they drink their wine,

And go up to their room.

Candles are lit,

Chocolate is fed.

 

They slip beneath the sheets,

The moonlight shines on their bodies.

The aroma of roses fills the room,

As the two loves lay smiling.

A gentle word,

The slightest of touch.

All thru out the night,

They make passionate love.

Author's Note

Written for no reason at all. What do you think?

Reviews

[Elizabeth]

Reminds me of being in a relationship. Love it.

[Rain]

short, but nice anyway
and i'm guessing that you spelt 'thru' that way on purpose xD
and also 'love' instead of lovers...ahahaha
i have no other critisism

hehe, overall, good job. I like shorter poems

[godmandistfu]

This is really cute, i like it.
Sounds like newly weds to me.

[Ashimoto]

If only every relationship was like that. That was cute. I loved it.

[Amaunet]

reminds me of what i miss the most about being in a relationship. the quiet moments holding onto one another and sharing a touch, a glance, and of course yourselves.

nicely done :D