Earth & Sky

I, Sky
Am forever moving above
You, Earth
I beat against you in gusts and storms
Pushing your tide over
I, Sky
Am forever loving
You, Earth

Author's Note

First-attempt at this kind of poem.

Reviews

[Ramya]

This is an absolute delight! Love this piece...for a first attempt at this of poem, I think you are too good!

Keep them coming!:)

[Khal Attero]

I wonder what gave you the inspiration to write something like this? Amazing. And you dare to call yourself a amateur?

[reflectingus]

Love your poetry, rhyme, structure, everything is rather beautiful. There's a strong sense of bonding, so much significance behind those words, emotions conveyed rather creatively, great job.

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice vision create by this poem. I like the description and purpose of the poem.
"I, Sky
Am forever loving
You, Earth"
Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Shy Girl]

A very intensely written poem. (short worded) Intense as to what is says though and how it feels through the reading. :)