The Child Called Poem

Can I...

teach you how
To make love with words
It seems...
like you're ready
For climax
Now...
let's begin, Love
You...
see
You start with
With this beau - ti - ful
Thin, Plain,Pale Lady
Very plain is this Lady
Until she met this handsome
Thick, Vibrant, Dark, Man
Very dark is this man
When he met her
They...
made love
Instantly
His member
Touches her surface
Emotions inked out
Their child
You see
Is Beauty
           Grace
                   Love
                         Anger
                                     Lust
                                                Violence
Their child
You see
Is Poetry

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is amazing. I like the flow of thoughts. The gentle and kind flow of words led the reader into the emotion of good words.
'Is Beauty
Grace
Love
Anger
Lust
Violence"
No weakness in the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Sleeping Maiden]

wow... the image is a great job in capturing your poem well Stunning with so much love in it! Truely amazing.. =)

[r. f. jordan]

the image doeas a nice job setting the groundwork for the subject, and the subject is a clear write. thank you for sharing your talent with us on this site.

This poem is beyond greatness. I love the each and everyone of your words used. well written my friend

[Khal Attero]

The amount of quality of your writing is amazing!

[Not Your Typical New Yo..]

I really like the top photo you chose because it really captures your meaning in this poem. I think your peom is nicely written, but with a few errors, but it's not a big deal. Nonetheless, it is, of course, a sexy peom and it is nicely written. Well done.

[Southern Cross]

Very nice imagery but a few grammatical mistakes, " Until he meet her" should read until he meets her.'His member Touch her surface".. should read , touches her surface. See if you agree.