Tears

Everything you stored,
pours as it fall.
Pain that was asleep,
awoken from its crib.

Tears that came from sadness,
as screams was yield from its torment.
You, who devoted it all.
Yearns to be truly love like them all.

Author's Note

I’m still new to poetry! Open to criticism :)

Reviews

[conversations with her ..]

I really enjoyed this poem, and I’m looking forward to reading more of your pieces. I'm kind of new on here and it would be an honor if you can review my 4 new recent poems. (The world is ours, Nostalgia, Paradise, and You)

Thank you and Keep up the Good work!

[MPoetry]

Thank you! it means a lot to know someone likes my works :) I would definitely check them out :D

[Eternity Rose]

This is a very deep and meaningful poem! There were just a few areas of the poem that were confusing, but over all well done.

[MPoetry]

Thank you for your review. I'm still improving :)

[DreadedUp]

I really like this poem especially the lines ''Pain that was asleep,
awoken from its crib'' as I can relate right now lol. But good job :)

[MPoetry]

Thank you