Maybe

You make me crazie
You're so fustrating
You're jus so confusing
Maybe this is jus a dream
Maybe we aren't meant to be
Maybe, maybe

Maybe this is jus a dream

Maybe, maybe

Maybe this is jus a dream

Maybe you aren't the one for me

Maybe, maybe

Maybe you aren't meant for meh

 

 

Author's Note

Maybe is a song that i wrote Nov. 15, 2012.
not finished.
opinions.

Reviews

[MachinaWriter]

Catchy, I could definitely see this as a song. I laughed at the very first two lines, because I could relate to them so well. "You make me crazy / You're so frustrating"

An easy to catch, yet very catchy rhyme scheme, so good work on that. I enjoyed the read. Can't wait to see what else you do with it ^^

[Rachel]

thank you, I thought of it last night i just started singing it, & was like i should really write this down before i forget it.
I've been really having issues with my relationship with my boyfriend. He is jus so controlling, in the beginning it was okay, but then he jus decided to try & take over my life,but now i'm taking control back on my life.
I'll be writing more of it soon when it comes to me.

[MachinaWriter]

lol I think everyone's had a relationship like that at some point. You're not alone. haha keep singing, it helps. I think a soft interlude would help with this song. Like this, then a softer, quiet part as if for the pain you usually "keep quiet" and to create contrast to this part. Just an idea, and by no extent of the imagination the best one, lol Either way, I'm sure what you come out with will be wonderful ^^