.....

She's so confused.
She doesn't know wat to do.
She's stuck.
She's hurting too much
Her tears fall faster.
She can't take it no longer.
Can't he see
She wants him,
She tryed to hide it,
There's no covering any more.
The new comer, she doesn't want.
She wants to be with him.

Reviews

[Wolfwind]

The words flow with passion and tear filled urgency in this piece. While short, it conveys allot of emotion. I even like how a few words are misspelled, for that enhances and gives us a feeling that the words were written quickly, like one might do on a napkin, after everyone else has just left the table.

Aaron =)