Wishes

She watches as the shooting star soars across the sky.
She closes her eyes tight and makes her wish.
She hopes, & prays for that wish to become true.



Always dream. Live your life. Be happy. Keep smiling. You never know, maybe some day that wish or beautiful dream of yours could just come true. :)
Don't get your hopes up. Always believe in yourself. Do not let others put you down. Follow through with your hopes, dreams,& wishes.

Reviews

[Dr. Wood ?]

nothing at all wrong with being positive..I don't like poems set out as prose, but then I am an oldie....I DO however appreciate the feeling behind this.....I think you might one day look back on this and smile kindly....That is if you continue to write....This reminds me in some ways of the poems I used to write ALL THOSE YEARS AGO

[Luke Rawlings]

A feel good poem, but it does feel like a first draft. I would definitely read and review a second one :)