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She opens her eyes
She sees a world that she thought would be full of corruption Instead she sees smiling faces.
So much happiness
She wonder why she feels so out of place
She walks through the beautiful field of flowers
She's now in a crowded room
So why does she feel so lonely
The room is spinning around her
She is falling into insanity

Reviews

[Luke Rawlings]

I think you may have meaned corruption and not corrupt, but a good piece. I like this one mainly for those juxtaposing images of the flowers and then the crowded room. Well done! :D

[B-poet]

The real question is why is she falling into insanity. Who'd ever thought personal disbelief could become such a beckoning experience. Nice work. An intriguing write and read.

[Justaguy]

Nice job capturing the feeling of being alone, when there are people all around.

[Rachel]

thank you.