Life

I had to write this for my english class. we had to try nd go with a poet's writing scheme, that we had picked out. i chose my best friend.

Is there anyway

that i can find hope

without feeling helpless

and stop feeling pain

can you show me life,

for just one second, I just want to feel it again

it's been too long, since i've took a breath

way too long, it has been.

 

 

Reviews

[Selena D. Harper]

We cannot find hope without feeling hopeless I really like this. You paint the image of life very well. Keep writing sweetie.

[Rachel]

Thank you. I haven't been on here in a long time. I need to get back into writing.

[Gerry Legister]

beautiful for one second and one moments breath, lovely words

[Rachel]

Thank you.