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A Poem by Rachel
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Another incomplete poetry piece by yours truly.

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Open your eyes
Take that step up
Breath in, now breath out
Keep your head up

© 2017 Rachel


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Why do you think or feel this is "incomplete"?

Posted 9 Years Ago


Rachel

9 Years Ago

I felt like there should've been more to it.
Rachel

9 Years Ago

But readig it now, it seems to be perfect the way it is.

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Added on October 25, 2015
Last Updated on July 19, 2017

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Rachel
Rachel

Weston, WV



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My name is Melinda, but my friends that have been in my life longer than my other friends call me Rachlel, but we spell it RACHLE. I blow out the candles on June 17. I'm a song, poetry, & story writ.. more..