What it Feels Like to Lose

From August 2012

I'll forget your lovely face and all the things you said

It hurts so much that I can't make myself get out of bed

I miss you still but there's nothing I can do

You made your choice, I miss your voice, but now its all on you.

I'm sick inside and so attached,

there goes "forever", it did not last

Why did you leave me? It all happened so fast

and what was supposed to be my future is now in the past...

Reviews

[Anand Sehgal]

I miss you still but there's nothing I can do

You made your choice, I miss your voice, but now its all on you.

nice rhyme and emotive thoughts. :) loved it.
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[Twizzler]

:) Thank you so much! Appreciate you taking the time to read.

[wolf843]

Wow that hits hard. Real good stuff. Almost brought a tear to my eye.

[Maya Garnes]

That was a nice poem. I could relate to this poem. Thank you. :)

[Twizzler]

You are most welcome, Maya. Thank you for reading.

[A. Amos]

Each word perfectly describes the romance... I admire your skills. 

[Twizzler]

You're too kind :) Thank You.

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome my friend

[Everett DeValle]

Gosh, your poem feels like my struggle against cigarettes lol...I know it meant something else. If you seem the other dude of the coin...it's a different picture but the same coin. ;)

Lovely emotions expressed well in your poem.

[Twizzler]

LOL. I can see what you mean, I'm a smoker myself so I know what its like.

[Everett DeValle]

Lol it's like a love/hate relationship. I'm a non smoker now. It's a beautiful thing to be a non smoker. ;)

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Another profound write of depth:)

[Twizzler]

Appreciate the review, Jonathan.

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Your very welcome Malerie, I like reading you:)

[Yaseen J Malik]

I like this one. You can feel how much of herself she put into the relationship. How eaisly love can become hate. How often hope becomes aspirations.

[Twizzler]

Very true. Thank you for reading and reviewing :)