RED CHEMICAL

The color of blood

The color of life

The color of cuts after scrapes with a knife

Written in red

Written in rage

I wanna pull out my feelings and smear them on the page

Raw emotion pulsating through my veins

My insides exposed and covered with stains...

What we could and couldn't have... is all that remains

Reviews

[Everett DeValle]

Deeply emotional,Malerie...and it cuts deeply like knife...they say in the writing world that one writes best under duress...your poem shows that great potential...it continues that process in that evolution...I look forward to reading your future accomplishments in your poetry and writing. ~Ev

[Twizzler]

Thanx Ev! I always appreciate your reviews.

[Everett DeValle]

You're very welcome, sweetie. :)

[I Am Svetlana]

I like how you used the different uses of red. Like, first the colors it can be, then how it can convey different emotions. The color red is so powerful...

[Twizzler]

Thank you! Glad you like it hun. Hope you're doing well.

[Wabbajack]

I hope things get better for you.

[Twizzler]

Thank you. Me too. Things seem to be going bad all around lately but its times like these where we can choose to rise from the ashes or stay dead.

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I love this Malerie:) I love the emotion.

[Twizzler]

Thanx Jonathan :)

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Very welcome my friend:)