Mushrooms

new song.

Penning a prose of my reflection

To one who's heart has been left alone

Light a mach for insparation

candles burn, spinning room

get's brighter as I go

 

lost in my hollo of existance

met a young fellow without a name (met a lepricon without a name?)

caught in the rush of independance

we drank to ease the pain

 

Glasses emty to elude myself

tonick sorrow's only aid

spinning clearly for a moment

but you just look at me

 

CHORUS

and I don't understand you

I didn't even notice

that I am my own lost one

I don't understand you

so beautifuly hopeless

you complane yet carry on (incomplete yet you carry on)

whithought an ounce of desparation

 

I sit and marval so amused at me

Haulling this cargo years of feet

Wanting, crying, asking to be free

yet knowing me I'll never be

 

So melt a cristal in my hand

inhale the thoughts that I miss

mirorr moves falling so short

of true happiness (of longed for happiness)

CHORUS:

 

I sit and marval so amused at you

lost in this cinical place (magical place?)

triping on a rainbow every afternoon

having conversations so lost in a maze

Author's Note

still in the prosess here. Posted for easy ref.

Reviews

[fireblossom]

Your vision is clear and the words are as simple as can be. This lyric rang true. I did the mental spell check for you as so often happens in your first drafts. :-) It's important NOT to worry about spelling and such until you are ready to say enough. Some of the lines are still a bit obscure i.e. Hauling this cargo years of feet ... but it will come.

Your voice is so gentle and attractive. Like honey and butterscotch.