Be Me

In the future

I long for a new beginning

Where I can be who I am

Without the constant feeling of being judged

Having people laugh

As I clumsy through 

Fearing the worse

And only failing in the end

I want a future

Where I can love

Be with the man 

I am so happy with

I just want a future

Where I can just be me...

Reviews

[Wolfe Greytome]

And this is exactly why I used to spend hours every day on this site - such powerful poetry in the simplest of forms. I've always admired how you can say so much without needing to rely on flowery technique to get it done. A wonderful piece to make my return to reviewing on. Well done!

[Manda]

im always worried i never write well enough or even strong enough. it is great that you always have something good to say after reading! it is always appreciated! ALWAYS. also glad to see you back.

[kbjami]

I love this! The simplicity is so emotional and I am there with you. I wish for the future of the individual as well to just be me. I want love as well. I can hear you speak so well. I love this poem. Well done.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

verily!

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good poem. I told my daughter. Have a skill to support your-self. Love will fade. A good skill is forever. I like the desire and hope in the poem. Life is for the taking. Must not listen to the naysayers and follow your hope and dreams. I like the purpose and the desire of the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Mauricio Montoya]

I see you're back on track, Nice work.

[InsanityWriter]

Excellent and very relatable. :) Great poem! ^_^