Giving Up

This is about a girl that just cant take the pain anymore as the days continue on. She is giving up and just letting her emotions out. She doesn't know how to deal with the fear of him being gone now.

I can't do this anymore
I can't pretend everything is ok
Because it isn’t
I can't hold these tears in any longer
I just need to let them fall
I'm not strong enough
I thought I could do this
But it isn’t getting me anywhere
It makes me weaker
And I'm tired of fighting
I can't do this alone
I needed you
You didn’t save me
Instead you let me fall
And now I'm hurt and in pain
With nobody to love or to hold
I'm scared and for the first time
I feel fear...

Reviews

[Luna Northstar]

Wow... your writing just amazes me. I love the feel and the emotion. It seems you write from experience. I hope I'm wrong. Either way, I love it, its amazing and powerful and heartfelt.

[*molly]

wow...i like this a lot. just really gets to me.... really good my cuzzie

[Ama May Cooper]

Powerful . very very powerful .. nice work

[deeps]

I can really relate to this one!
Emotions poured out well with this!

[Charles D. Moorer]

She deals with his being gone one day at a time.

[bubbles]

holding back you're feeling is never good for you and as this poem shows most of the time people will express it. well communicated. almost made me cry.

[Bright Eyes]

This piece is very honest. There is one thing that you might want to correct: Im needs an apostrophe so it's I'm, that way it makes sense as a contraction for "I am," but other than that, great work