Our Love

There love was so strong that nothing could pull them apart. Life was always full happiness and never sorrow. They had one another to get through with the past and make a future together.

Our love
Beats to the sound of our hearts
It has a melody of its own
We harmonize
For we sing and we dance
And love one another
Together were happy
And never are we sad
When we kiss its so sweet
Hugging so tightly
Not letting go of what we love most
Never have we loved like this before
So perfect and sincere
Nothing can be said or done
That could make us change our minds
About each other
Because we truly
Love one another

Reviews

[The Wave]

lovely piece.

"Our love
Beats to the sound of our hearts
It has a melody of its own
We harmonize "

Love the beginning. Nicely written overall,
Good job.

[PaperHearts]

Aww, how cute! Nice write! I liked how simplistic it was, yet how truly heartfelt and genuine it was. My favourite lines were the first two; 'Our Love/Beats to the sound of our hearts'. :) A sweet, relatable poem. Nice work,
~PaperHearts

[Cassandra D.]

This was pretty neat.

[zack]

wow very good nice flow and ever thing

[rachielle]

This is such a happy side of you. I love it.

[Ama May Cooper]

This lacks ryhtm but still portrays a powerful image.. of happiness and a sorta heartfelt love .. great piee of work x

[A]

Really, really powerful. Beautiful.

[Scarlet Pulse]

Very very good. This poem actually reminds me of one I wrote. It has a very calm but powerful sense.

[Mauricio Montoya]

Manda
I’m at a lost of words this poem has rhythm with every beat.
Beautify written, love in its fullest
Mauricio

[Star Wolf]

Could be true love, souls mates, but this is very romantic and tender.