Broken Hearted

A girl with a broken heart. Cant believe its over and that he said goodbye. She thought he was the one. I guess we never know before its all over. And we realize we were wrong...

I lay there

With tears falling down my face

With no feeling at all

I lay there silently 

I cry and cry

He had said goobye

I wasnt ready too

I couldnt do it

I loved him

And I thought he loved me

But I guess I was wrong

So I lay here helplessly lost

Waiting for someone

To pick up the pieces

Of my broken heart

 

Reviews

[A]

I loved the beginning of this. :D Then, it got sort of choppy...

Either way, you once again fail to disappoint. :D

[Ama May Cooper]

Love the first 4 lines great intro very strong nto so sure about so steady line dosent seem to fit amongst the pain.
Overall an amazing piece, painful and heartfelt so deep and emotional loved it

[deeps]

Such emotion pourred out here,
Very well expressed and stated!