Just Go

She told him to get the f**k away! Because she found someone else to love her. Someone that means something to her.

Just go

I dont need you anymore

I found someone that can love me

This time the right way

He actually makes me happy

I dont have to be afraid anymore

He doesnt make me cry

Instead he wipes away the tears

I am so pissed at you

I wasted all my time trying to love you

Trying to make you see

See the beauty of me

But I didnt matter to you

You never loved me

You just wanted to push me around

And break me into pieces

I gave you your chance

And you blew it

So get the hell out of my face

And stay out of my life

Because I got someone new to love

And its not you

So just go

Reviews

[Elizabeth Marie O'neil-..]

I agree with Wolfe Greytome.
its a fantastic blend of both worlds.

[Wolfe Greytome]

This is probably the best piece of yours that I have had the privilege to read. It is a wonderful union of your two distinct styles (your softer side and your hard hitting emotional side) rolled into one beautiful write. Very well done!!!!

[Syldor]

It's wonderful. The blunt phrases make it fast and easy to understand, anyone can read it without difficulty and still get the full impact of what your trying to say. The poem has a nice flow and clearly communicates the emotion behind the words. I love it.

[Jess.]

I agree with Kit Kat, I like this the way it is.
Well written, and shows emotion real well.
It's a good piece! =)

[deeps]

I think it's wonderful the way it is,
Powerful write full of emotion.

[ebur™]

I really like this piece. I'm pretty sure many people have had this moment in their life where they were thrown around by another, and this poem explains it all very easily.

I like it. It's really well-written, and the emotion is really well disguised.