Lovers

He does so much for her. He loves her so much. He keeps her standing tall. He plays with her hair and sings her to sleep. They love each other dearly. If they only knew =)

There you stand

Right here by my side

Never letting me fall

You hold me in your arms

And kiss my sweet lips

You sing to me

As you play your guitar

You move your fingers through my light blonde hair

Every night you call me

Just to say good night

You hold my hand

And show me off to your friends

You do so much for me

And because of it

I love you

Oh if you only knew

I love it when you play with my hair

And when you kiss me

When you tell me how beautiful I am

I love everything about you

And I thank you

For loving me

So damn well

Reviews

[Star Shyne]

I love how this flows. Great job, enjoyed it all the way =)

[Jason]

I love the way this write tackles the playful nature within love. It kind of bounces throughout the work painting quite the brilliant combination of emotion and fun. Beautiful!

Very, very sweet.
it's funny, when you're in love with someone you want so badly to tell them just how much they mean to you, but the words seem to escape every time, because nothing can describe the feeling.

[Daydreamer21]

It's really cute,nice flow ^^
Really captures a first-love essance

[deeps]

This is wonderful, such a lovely flow here

[Destinee]

Wow this was awesome. the last three lines completely wrapped up everything so succinctly, it was a really great read. So simple and yet so full of emotion. Great Job. Write On.

[Jess.]

Aww, lovely piece once again! The last three lines are my fav =)

[Wolfe Greytome]

This is a wonderful piece that truly captures the essence of what every person tries to attain. Well done, yet again.