Words Hurt

It still hurts me... Those words keep going through my head. It was all just a lie...

Hasnt anyone ever told you
That words hurt
And they scar you for life
I guess if someone did
I wouldnt be laying here
Hurting some damn much
Why did you have to do it
Why did you have to tell everyone
It's all just a lie
I never sexted anyone
I cant believe you would go let low
Just so you can get revenge on me
Because I broke our relationship
You may not think you hurt me
But you honestly did
Your words hurt me so damn much
And honestly I'll never think of you the same
Your just an a*****e
Unable to control your emotions
Oh and can you do me a favor
Never ever talk to me again

Author's Note

Ugh... It hurts so much knowing that someone you once loved has now become a total asshole... I honestly dont care about grammar or flow

Reviews

[Scarlet Pulse]

This poem was really intense. I felt the anger and despair. Good write.

[Céce]

I love this, because I can relate so well. Euggh. I wonder how many people have lied about me and I don't even know it.... yeah... he's a jerk. It's way better to be angry about it than sad... you'll get over it, I promise. I did.

hugs!

[Jessica Mai]

The best poems come from raw, strong emotion. A very good poem. I could literally feel your anger and hurt

[Wolfe Greytome]

Looks like a lot of emotion getting vented in these recent pieces of yours. Keep writing and get it all out - you'll feel better in the end.

[AbsentElements]

I have met my share of a******s...One more recently....
I'm sure not as many people could have written this so....Powerfully. It is very clear every emotion you felt while writing this.

[Tate Morgan]

Excellent

[*Kantola*]

No problem with the grammar flow. I know exactly how you feel :( My best friends broke it off with me, so 1 strike against them for being a******s. THEN they started a rumor that me and my new female friend were caught making out in the stairwell. I mean, come on, I'm as straight as a line!! Anyway,
I loved this. I love things I can relate to, if you havent found out since the first review :P
I agree, words hurt, but the best thing you can do is look ahead instead of looking behind you.
"Looking on the past wishing I could go back, but realizing that I'm best where I'm at." I realize it ends with a preposition, but who cares :)
Lovely job, yet again, Manda!! Lots of emotions in this, the jostled and jarred phrasing really brings it out.

[deeps]

I used to know this feeling ever so well.
I can feel your heart on this.
You express yourself very well, your emotions are quite clear!
Wonderful write!

[Simpleasures]

Awww...that's life, we get hurt and people lie on us, but I guarantee you'll be glad it happened earlier in life than later. Learn from it and move on. Keep sharing your emotions.

[A]

If you didn't care about grammar or flow, I'm surprised. This poem was quite amazing, and really REALLY powerful.

Don't let some jerk get you down, you're better than him.