Good Girl Gone Bad

She cheated. She cant love. There is not one good bone in her body.

Don't let her long blonde hair, and dark green eyes fool you.
Beyond her beauty lies a monster.
She stirs the night waiting for her next victim.
Her eyes hypnotize you.
Her kisses put you under a lust spell.
One so strong, there is no way to escape.
She torments you and makes you give her, her every desire.
She loves to tie you up and watch you scream in pain.
You can't trust her, nor can you love her.
So don't let her beauty fool you.
For she is another good girl gone bad.

Author's Note

This is kind of different. I dont know what you will think, so give me your opinions please!

Reviews

[*Kantola*]

The title automatically made me think of Rihanna's song, Good Girl Gone Bad :)
Great write!
Nice imagery, i was able to picture this character well!
Ahh, i just love your poems! I CAN RELATE so well!!!!!!!! OMG!

[Mauricio Montoya]

Well this is deferent but its poetry and in poetry any thing goes
It doesn’t rhyme but I like how it come together I’d say it not bad,
Good job.

[clauds294]

Nice! I see those so often I almost feel bad for the people that get captured in her trap... Almost :P lol Nice work! :)

[MissWordSmith]

haha this was so odd but nice. i liked the way the lines didn't rhyme but still had a unique flow to them.
keep it up bad girl! :P

[James Watts]

Reminds me of someone I know, only she went bad long, long ago lol. I liked it. Anytime I can relate to something or the work reminds me of some place, person, or thing I consider it a job well done. I cannot review on the technical parts because I am still new to poetry, but I can tell you rather or not I liked it and I did.

[Scarlet Pulse]

It is different... I like it but I feel its a little corny... (she stirs the night waiting for her next victim)... I think that line or close to it was in another one of your poems. But this line threw me off a bit. That sounds like a murder scene, not a masochist scene. Interesting idea. Needs a little work, and if you do relate to it, get into more detail and give your readers something to see and enjoy out of your words.

[Alicante lullaby]

good girl gone bad..wow..queer.