No More

I dont need him anymore... I'm done

Just shut up!
I don't want to hear it!

You're not sorry,
And you don't care!

You already told me to leave,
And never come back!

I did what you said,
Instead of taking your head!

So just shut up!
And stop your whining!

I don't need this,
And I don't need you!

So shut up!
And leave me alone!

Author's Note

I don't need this pain anymore. I don't need to be sad... Its been a while since I've wrote anything, but finally I managed to write something. Tell me what you think

Reviews

[Satchmo's Gal]

anger seeping out of every pore

[charlotte talley]

simple and to the point. he hurted you so anything he says you don't hear it. I felt like that a few times and I can really relate to your feelings. when you are hurt by someone(especially) a love, it is hard to overcome the pain. but believe me in time you will find it in your heart to forgive him, and still carry on with your life.

[Chloe Christine]

Simple,
I love it.
Nice job. :)

[Havatara]

It's nice. It shows your true feelings. So a guy told you to leave you alone and then followed you? Hypocrite.

[Daniel Gardner]

Very firm stand. You described your feelings well.

[GunMetal]

Like a fist pounding the table.

[Jasmarine]

F*CKING AMAZING. I love this poem. This is EXACTLY how I felt when s**t happened to me, the only way I could get it out was writing Hurt in my works. But this is the other side of the pain I couldn't quite express. Thank you for doing it! :D

[Haifa]

Great job. I can feel your anger feelings, like you were saying stop and I had enough.. Great poem, well done.

[Pax Analog]

Wow! This one would make a good neon sandwich board. You have a natural blunt flash feel.

When Pebbles breaks up w/BamBam, she has to hit hard. I don't mean that mockingly, I just find most realities cartoonish.

[AbsentElements]

I don't understand when people say one thing, and then expect you just to come back... I was stupid enough to fall for it more than once...But not anymore. I can relate to this poem well. Very nice write.