Burning Love

She thought she knew what love was until she met him and then she realized that this wasn't another foolish game. It was the real deal.

My heart
Beating at the speed of light

My body tingling
When your presence was near

I could almost feel you
As you moved my way

I felt your eyes
Gazing gracefully at me

I looked up
And there our eyes met

Our bodies brushing against each other
As we pass each other in the hall

You grab my arm
And pull me toward you

Before I could say a word
You gently kissed me

...Then the world around us fell silent
And it's only you and I

Your arms
Wrapped tightly around my waist

Our lips
Meeting for the first time

Our hearts
Together at last

We were in love
And forever we would be

~I love you

Author's Note

This is just another one of those amazing times in my life that I wanted to share with everyone!

Comments are allowed and I'd be happy to listen to what you have to say or think

Reviews

[zappy]

i think its great.

[Katannaism]

This is very lovely. Truly sweet and romantic. The words are well chosen and arranged. A very good poem indeed. Loved this.

[kbjami]

Good job. A real beauty and nice imagery.

Glad it's an amazing moment right now in your life.

[Daydreamer54]

i liked thw imagery and the passion in this poem1 great write! ^^

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This is a real beauty.
I dont think anymore can be said.