With Me

Stay with me, love with me, dream with me. Forever...

Dream for me
And promise
To never let me go

Love me
For who I am
Not what I wear

Show me
The world
And its beauty

Take me
By the hand
And kiss me softly

Whisper to me
And say
You love me

Stay
Because you love me
And not because you're lonely

With me
I hope you can see
How much I love you

No matter
Where we are
Always know I love you

So dream with me
And promise
To never let me go

Reviews

[Chris]

The hardest thing a young poet faces is making word choices... too young, too old - no clue, too known... and what really IS CLICHE. BUT the difficulty is more of matching the words to what they THINK they are saying. Its hard enough being YOU...

Chris

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Sounds reasonable to me.
Reasonable and Romantic.
Pure sweetness.