Ing

A day in the life with ing verbs

Waking

Sighing

Rubbing my eyes

Faking

Pretending

Telling my lies

Living

Smiling

Saying "I'm okay"

Going
Fighting

Ending the day

Laying

Sleeping,

Dreaming, goodbye.

Author's Note

I wasn't sure if I should have three words before dreaming or only two.

Reviews

[kyrie]

Like I said at school, I love this one. It takes a reader through the Fighter's day--the reluctant waking up, the dragging through the day, the lies to hide behind, the bed we collapse upon. Be strong, hun. We'll make it out alive. *hugs tight*

[Bella-Marie]

Love the rhyming, love the rhythm... another excellent job! :) You are a great poet my friend, and have an awesome profile picture.