Decision

Life after you

My life is mine to live

My heart is mine to give

I Owe the choice to forgive

Its time for  you to leave

'Cause I'm not naïve 

To stand your lies like EVE

No time to be negative 

The world is mine that's my belief

Author's Note

My first try

Reviews

[Ayushi Beura]

The perfect way to express the statement "Its time for you to leave" in the poem.
"'Cause I'm not naïve
To stand your lies like EVE"
"My heart is mine to give
I Owe the choice to forgive"

There are some lines where I felt like the most powerful means of expressing your sentiments.
I loved the way, I loved the emotions tried to express, I just loved the poem.
Thanks for sharing:) :) :)

[Manel]

thank you so much for passing by i appreciate it

[Christina]

Manel, its a straight forward "Decision" and very well written the only thing being please check this "I Owen the choice to forgive" It should be "I owe the choice to forgive" and not Owen!

[Manel]

thanks a lot for your remarks they are always useful christina

[Christina]

Continue to write more Manel I love reading your writings, God Bless!

[wordman]

and a great try it is ! stand tall,it`s your life

[Manel]

thank you ; yes it is and im going for it

[Marina]

Crystal clear message to the world. I really liked it. Sometimes we take these words for granted, but until we actually act upon them, they will always remain, well, words.
You seem like a brave person, keep it up!

[Manel]

thanks for your kind words

[Shannon]

This feels like a bold statement if my understanding of where you are is correct! The reference to eve is well done and little unique. Not the evil one, but the one lies to. Do you want to know about typos?

[Manel]

No , i dont ans i will be very happy if you informe me about it
Ans thank you for accouraging me with my start S.Mi

[Shannon]

Own is how you spell a word that means it belongs to you. Owen is a name.

You are welcome, I am new here, too. Feel free to stop by and check out my read, but it is very different than yours.

[Manel]

Thanks a lot

[Manel]

Thanks a lot