No ,you

You think I can't live without your

Dont be so sure Iam telling you

Loving you is whatI shoudn't do 

starting new is my preview

Living with you is just my pain

When I met you I had no brain

I let you skip in my veins

My mistake I wont explain 

It's time to take a new train 

Reviews

[Monica Chen]

Lovely poem! The rhyme scheme was catchy and I love the phrase "I let you skip in my veins", which can be interpreted as either a lighthearted, passing interest or a darker, more obsessive passion. For some reason, I also find a connection between the "veins" and the "new train" where iron veins are a term used to describe train tracks sometimes.

[Manel]

thank you Monica for this review

[Taino]

Sometimes we must start over. Off one track to find another. Very well written!

[Manel]

thank you so much Taino

[Anindita Janhabee]

It's true that we often make mistakes... after all we are humans...
even God make mistakes...
but the feelings that came up from within you perfectly reaches to the reader...
nice one...
: )/Anindita

[Manel]

thank you for your time reaing my writing
we make mistakes and we learn a lot from them it is a way to grow up and be mature i guess

[Anindita Janhabee]

yes.. right... : )