Nature

It is based off of a prompt that i made myself. Lets see if you can get the image I am trying to portray.

I stand on a smooth beach, the water lapping my feet. 

In the sky the sun gives the land its lovely gold. 

The clouds like giant marshmallows, carry it within. 

The air is brisk. 

The ocean is old and rhythmic. 

A whale happily takes a breath in front of me. 

The birds call their lovely songs and I stand listening and feeling,

As nature lives around me.

Reviews

[Najam Us Saher]

I love beaches too....you have really created a soothing imagery which makes me feel like I am there, such was the description. I loved it.