truth

 

It was cool in the begining

we were friends

then you asked if i wanted something more

december 30

i gave love a try

i couldnt have wanted more

our late night conversations seemed to just fly by

i counted down the minutes until i could touch your face

i never meant to fall in love

i thought it was a game

but soon i found my weakness

BIG SURPRISE: it was you

you made me feel so special

i wouldnt go with out talking to you,

you were all i thought about

now that you're gone not much has changed

my heart skips a beat just at the thought of you name

you still mean the most to me

my friends say its a shame

that i waste my time living in the past

they tell me to just let go

well they can kiss my a*s

cause they dont know

the way you make me feel

no one else could ever explain

you said i was too distant

we had too much space

you never got to see me

so i had to be replaced

and i know it doesnt matter

since you have her now

but for the record i would have waited forever

i guess thats what im doing now

waiting for a miracle to happen

a few thousand wishes to come true

cause the real truth is...

im still in love with you.

 

Author's Note

About a stupid boy, I wrote all of these almost over a year ago. But they still mean alot to me.

Reviews

[kewlbluetiger]

Whoa you need to title this!!!
The main reason is more people would be interested in reading your work if you gave them a title, and this shows some pretty strong talent!

There's a ton of mad emotion being released there, but you managed to keep a rhythm and flow to the words. Which isn't always easy to do when you're writing something emotional! Good stuff. Keep writing. I'll keep reading.

[Piikapoka]

Diffidently title this! :)
You are very talented! i love this poem! My favorite part is,
"but soon i found my weakness
BIG SURPRISE"
its very catchy.
if you like reading poems as well as writing, please stop by.
Great job! Love it!

[bluessadmood]

This was so lovely,young lady ,you maybe shooting for the stars one day ha ha
How cool at the start..just friends then you asked if I wanted for more
Our late night talks seemed to fly,you stopped all my time,and all around
Wish I could touch that face,never wanted love,thought it just a game
Then I found how weak I was,you make me feel so strange
Would talk to you forever,you were all I thought of
And now you are gone ,all around me say,its a shame,they laugh
But they never know the way you kissed,and I wont say
But you are gone and I am here to wait,could wait for years
for you to come..a thousand wishes I made just for you to be in love with me..again
Oh what a lovely dreamy ..so inspiring write..