THE VAMPIRE'S CARESS

THE VAMPIRE'S CARESS IS MY UTTER DISTRESS,
IT MAKES ME FEEL WEAK, MAKES ME WANT TO DIE &
YET, STRANGELY I FEEL THIS IS ALL A LIE...
I YEARN FOR HIS CARESS, TO BE IN HIS EMBRACE,
TO LET HIM TAKE ME DRESSED IN SATIN & LACE...
HIS EYES PENETRATING MY HEART, MY SOUL;
YET, AS MUCH AS I WANT IT I TREMBLE AS HE 
APPROACHES; TREADING SILENTLY IN THE ROOM...
I CAN FEEL MY HEART RACE, AS IT SENSE IT'S DOOM...
TOO LATE, HE IS AT MY SIDE, HE SMILES AND I FEEL COLD 
INSIDE....
HE MEANS TO HAVE ME NO MATTER WHAT, THERE'S 
NOWHERE TO GO, THERE'S NOWHERE TO HIDE...
I AM A VICTIM OF THE VAMPIRE'S CARESS & YET ODDLY,
I FEEL COMFORT & PRIDE...
I WILL FINALLY BE ABLE TO LIVE FOREVER,
& OH, WHAT A SIGHT!...
I WILL BECOME A CREATURE OF THE NIGHT!
					

				

Reviews

[Olivia Long]

Has dr.suess risen from the grave? just a guess but i'm pretty sure there are poems where you don't have to rhyme every word. I know your probaly go on my page and write like a dozen bad reviews for me saying that but I'm just saying it because i think you could be REALLLLLLLLLLLLLLLY good if you tried something different. I know it wasn't as pssitive as you might have liked it but try something new and you'll probaly excel in it.

[Nicole]

i would love to be a creature of the night, i want a vampire
this poem is really good!

[Lestat's daughter]

Yes, yes, Yes, YES